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Granted

 

 

 

 

If you’ve ever

traced your shadow

with your mind’s eye

 

heard the whisper

of a spring wind

that encouraged

 

sung your soul’s song

with an ardor

that delighted

 

felt or tasted

with emotions

that transformed you

 

then, you my friend

are in fact a

fervent poet.

 

 

 

 

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    December 6, 2008
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    I like the pace of this piece. It reads very well; especially aloud and is very nicely done.


  • Susan John Francis
    November 14, 2008
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    A deep thought here... and well written....


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    November 13, 2008

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    So very true.. the pensive mind of the poet.. the deep searchings and the joyful expressions.

    Brilliant!


  • chilali
    November 12, 2008
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    Brilliantly penned! I don't know what else to say. I am speechless!


  • Amera gold member
    November 12, 2008

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    I've done all those things! This is brilliant! I can't say much more I just have to go back and read it again.

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • Margaret Denham gold member
    November 12, 2008

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    You not only answered the prompt but you did so with some beautifully expressed examples of the feelings that surge through you when the words flow from your soul.

    The hunger to share each and every thought and the glowing sense of accomplishment when you see your efforts gracing the page. Then there comes the tweaking and editing to try bring them closer to perfection.

    Best wishes in the contest dear.

    Love Margaret



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