our love is a kind unknown to many
unheard to all but us
we share every thing
from our anger and pain
to our deep profound feelings of love and belonging
we share
we love
we are
Author notes
purplesparrow/Tibby schwartz
A contest entry
- 30-60 words Contest PIF Quickie..Picture Prompt ..58th Contest by Spiritualangel by spiritualangel.
660 points, ended December 3, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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well writen
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wow,
wow,sounds like twilight! -
Beautiful. Well done. Best of Luck.
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12 Years Old eh?
Nice write young friend! Trust you'll do well in the Contest! Don't know what's up with you young poets who don't cap or use punctuation! Form of rebellion or lack of knowledge? 
All the best you Parisian! 
Just saw the pix prompt! 
Way to go! Great job!
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Wowzers, Tibbywuv! This is really cool. I love how you use the free verse to bring out the beautiful simplicity of this raw and emotional poem. It's really nice. I think you did a great job.
Lylas,
Emmz
PS. How do I know Mallory? She's one of my best buddies! We go to the same schoolio. Message me!
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a great take onthe promt very deep and powerfully true we are says so much as we are all unique in some way good luck inthe contestmaralisa
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Beautiful!!!!
Love it!
( I am feeling a tad overly-romantic at the moment, so this one touched me deeply.)
One teeny note - 'everything' is one word.
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Very strongly worded. I love it Tibbz.
Luv-v-v-v-v-v-v-v-v-v-v-vz,
Mallory
xoxoxoxoxoxooxox
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