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to write.


to paint
with only a scratchy pen

to leak thoughts
in a dark musty corner

to forget, and to remember
to know, and to question


i can capture
his fleeting smile, the cold rain
her blue Mondays, dull mornings



a photographer
a painter

a dust particle hanging,
suspended.


and i am your dream, your words
with this simple scratchy pen.

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    December 6, 2008

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    The images that come to mind reading this are very vivid to me. I like the metaphoric quality of the piece and find it to be very well done. The closing lines I do believe are perfect for this. Bravo!