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Weeping Deity

Tears.

I spent decades trying to summon the heart
to walk towards the rainbow;
to lightly caress the sky-bound art
then reap my reward from below.

The lush blends from shade to shade
seem like beauty at first glance,
but time proves it a masquerade
by the devil and his lance.

I rolled under the disguise
meeting only heavy rain:
God's tears stinging my eyes
as he cries for
my misfortunes.

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  • trekkergirl silver member
    November 13, 2008

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    I really do like this creative little write. This is wonderful the way you wrote this. I love it. It flows well and is creative and full of emotions as well. Thanks for sharing this and thanks for entering it into my contest. Great write you have here.