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Image

Object's light
reflects the image
that is split
into multiple directions
to different mirrors
of numerous perceptions
where the minds see
and absorb
with inconsistent selves.
Then echoed back
to the collective
it will form I
as I am an image
and I will be recognized.

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  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    November 12, 2008

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    Very deep
    I love this
    one light creates many
    and returns to one.
    beautifully done my friend
    God bless you...


  • ShawnTheDinosaur
    November 12, 2008

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    I like how you wrote this, sometimes It doesn't flow, but over all it was really good, nice job, I like it, short, but I like it.

    Bravo

    Shawn