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I tried to move on and forget
Your voice and the things it promised
Tried to ignore the way I heard
My future in your every word

Never wanted you to know
That I was fighting and drowning so slow
All I wanted was to be your girl
And to show you you are my world

But then I made a mistake and hurt you so bad
And now I think I lost the best I ever had
And I keep trying to just not look back
Cause I dont think you should forgive that

You deserve better, and I only want you
There's so many things I caint undo
So take this apology and throw it aside
Scream at me then look in my eyes

As I take this blade to my wrists
And heal myself with its tender kiss
Then in you slit my throat and let it run dry
I'll kiss the blade and whisper goodbye

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I am sorry.....but I can't fix it. Goodbye.

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