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Cry For Me

Slipping through the cracks each new step I take,
Wondering where I'll end up in this unknown blue dimension from now,
Just hope your next to me waiting to cover me with your love,

As the trains continue and the planes circle the world,
I Still can't manage to put a smile on my face,
As we enter a new era..and take destiny in a place unknown,
I Still can't manage to pull off a laugh,

As the world continues to revolve and society continues to enjoy,
I do nothing more than merely play a game,
Hoping no one can crack the code,

I lay awake at night, waiting for her to sweep into my arms,
Guess I'll never know when It'll happen or even if it will,
Hoping one day i can stand still in this never ending pain,
Am i really thanking God knowing I'm alive every second,

Just asking for help from the one who gave me life, wishing to give me death,
Because every breath i take,
Is truly a breath of pain....

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Written February 2nd, 2004

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  • Hells Angel 323
    February 2, 2004
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    wow this is a great poem it left me speechless its wow really good i love how you wrote it keep up the GREAT work