Your glances
Send me... butterflies
Your words
Melt... my heart
My love
I promise,
Even death can’t pull us apart
[title]
Author notes
Contest prompt:
21 on:
"As our hearts started beating faster, I recalled your laughter from long ago. There's nothing like you and I." This is from the song Nothing Like You and I by The Perishers.
This is written from a male's point of view. lol
Thanks for reading!
In a list
A contest entry
- Anyone up for an afternoon quickie? by chilali.
550 points, ended November 12, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
1 - 7 of 7
-
Yeah!
I could see this on a lovely Anniversary Card! Best wishes in the Contest. Love the sentiment, choice of words & this could also be part of a good Country Music Love Song!
-
This is a very sweet poem! I like the way you used '...' to create a pause and a rhythm. Lovely!
-
Such sweet sentiments in so few words. I believe you gave what was asked from you in this quaint little piece. Great job and congratulations on you HM.
-
Aww, this is very sweet,
i should of done something like this instead, DOH!!!
Well done and good luck to you
Great take on the prompt
Ken
-
Aww! So sweet. I really liked this. A lot. Thank you for entering and good luck
-
loving and sweet words, that touch a person in a short amount of time, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
-
Lovely
Adding your comment:
1 - 7 of 7
