Capricious, changeable with everything,
we change unchanging our life on having changed;
vibrate, sob, sing, wave incessantly;
neither concretion nor accommodate.
Author notes
Prompt: "As our hearts started beating faster, I recalled your laughter from long ago. There's nothing like you and I." This is from the song Nothing Like You and I by The Perishers.
21words
A contest entry
- Anyone up for an afternoon quickie? by chilali.
550 points, ended November 12, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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A very nice take on the prompt
I loved the words you've used here in this piece. Thank you so much for your entry and good luck 
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i like this one it was a interesting read, keep it flowing my friend, and good luck in the contest
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