The quickened forte
between our love-wrecked heartbeat
sounded like a broken record.
Monochrome memories
of yesterday's promises and our
runaway laughter.
Author notes
prompt: As our hearts started beating faster, I recalled your laughter from long ago. There's nothing like you and I.
--Nothing Like You and I by The Perishers.
21 words
A contest entry
- Anyone up for an afternoon quickie? by chilali.
550 points, ended November 12, 2008, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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you are awesome. awesome i tell ya! omgosh... your words are so beautiful. and that gold... you totally deserved it. "runaway laughter" "monochrome memories" these linjes are beautiful. i love this. keep penning
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I liked how your poem was so similar to the prompt in meaning. Best of luck and very nice entery.
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i think this is something pure, my friend it was a joy to read, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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Wow! This is so very beautiful. I really loved your take on the prompt. Thank you so very much for entering and good luck
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