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My Wish My Prayer My Sanity

Betrayal of the highest form
I can't bare to think of it
It may make me not see the dawn
Secret love affairs
I look on in disgust
Or jealousy
These memories I hold
I wish them to turn to dust
Simple wish away
For that simple event
These lines that I write now
More than a vent
I wish for her to hold me
In the same way I hold her
But it seems in fear she trusts
Not hearing all the things she must
A spell? A Charm? Some sort of Wish?
To help her see more clearly
What hurts the most
I don't think she take me seriously
A prayer for forgiveness?
Of all my past mistakes?
Maybe undoing my wrongs
Will help her see my face
But Autumn has gone
The transition of change
There went my chance
For her and I to gaze

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  • Sam-I-Am
    November 17, 2008
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    marc.... I had to highlight the page to read this... change the font man...