She touched my lips,
and my heart gave way.
Remembering her smile
from yesterday. And the
the kiss of this day.
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21 words
Prompt: "As our hearts started beating faster, I recalled your laughter from long ago. There's nothing like you and I." This is from the song Nothing Like You and I by The Perishers.
A contest entry
- Anyone up for an afternoon quickie? by chilali.
550 points, ended November 12, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is so romantic, keep up the good work
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some clver inner rhymes in this one
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hmmm..
this is cute.. nice one here..
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Aww this is so sweet, the kisses linger tho your gone, our love will remain for ever strong
Beautifully put piece, love the rhyme! All the best in the contest 
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This was a very touching piece, how that the past is not forgotten but only adds to the beauty of today. Great take on the prompt, best of luck.
~Noor
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Wow! I really enjoyed this. I really liked your take on the prompt. Well done. Thank you for entering and good luck
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