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Let me .. ( Gold )

Let me glide you across the stars

Serenade under the moonlit shadows.

Breeze whispers our Waltz

rhythm tempo's heart beat.

Struck by cord in Orchestrated moments

treasured my loves desires..

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PIF Prompt 30 to 60 words
Reptile Lady

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  • spiritualangel
    December 3, 2008
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    Beautiful. Well done. Best of Luck.


  • Alyzeh
    November 18, 2008

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    Beautiful. Love the words you have used to describe the picture. It's a lovely take on the prompt. You better win a shiny for this one too


  • maralisa silver member
    November 16, 2008

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    a wonderful take on the promt your imagery is so beautifully touching I love the border its delightful to good luck inthe contest my friend maralisa


  • Midnite wolf gold member
    November 15, 2008
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    such a peaceful write hun, goes extemely well with the border, take care hun,
    love mil.


  • aboomer silver member
    November 13, 2008

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    Lovely! So serene and peaceful (goes well with the border!).
    Just - lovely!
    best wishes in your contest.

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