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Man made change

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These majestic polar bears,
Once roaming these lands,
That I now stand on looking.
 
Solid concrete taken over,
What was once nature's,
Black and white is the colors.
 
Not even the mountain fox,
Survived these man made change,
And soon we will pay the price.
 
 

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Prompt: Picture
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Limit: 30-60 words, 45 used

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  • spiritualangel
    December 3, 2008
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    Beautiful. Well done. Best of Luck.


  • maralisa silver member
    November 16, 2008

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    a fantastic take onthe promt the last stanza is so powerfully true we must do what we can to save the extinctions of many species but like you say time ins runing out because of mans inteferances with natures paterns good luck inthe contest marailsa


  • Maxboy gold member
    November 12, 2008

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    Very nice take on the prompt and a wonderful poem.

    Beautiful...Best of luck in the contest


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 12, 2008

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    ain't that the truth but that is what man is know for, we expand, sadly it cost others their homes, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest