Symphony of colours,
rainbow's that fake illusion.
Transparent cloth covers blindness,
hidden behind shadows,
darkness, concealed envy.
Emerald eyes,
lost in seclusion.
Solitary heart comforts cold,
bare naked souls
bleed.
Author notes
Image PIF
Reptile Lady
30 words
A contest entry
- 30-60 words Contest PIF Quickie..Picture Prompt ..56th Contest by Spiritualangel by spiritualangel.
650 points, ended November 30, 2008, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Transparent cloth covers blindness,
hidden behind shadows,
darkness, concealed envy.
Very nice. Loved it. Best of luck
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You have really picked your words carefully and the end result is wonderful sis. Good luck in the contest.
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Excellent use of thirty words---
I wish you the best of luck in the contest!
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Ooh, you are getting so dark of late... And I love it...
Fantastically visual metaphor wrapped in a delightfully dark narrative confined in 30 words...
Keep up the good work...
Well done!!!
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wowza me lady
luv de way ya always make a poem in dark
gd luck 2 ya in de contest
cheers abe
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Great take on the prompt Julie! It's dark and your words paint an absolutely amazing picture! Great work! Good luck in the contest! =)
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Great in-depth and emotion for that picture! Love your wording - for so few words, you really 'bared the naked soul'..
Well done!
best wishes in the contest
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OOoh sis! Love the dark imagery portrayed here, awesome write! An excellent take on the pic, lot more than I got looking at it
All the best in the contest
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