When I look into your eyes
I discover just how amazing
you truly are.
You're everything I need
a friend,
brother,
lover.
What more can I ask
from you
than what you already give to me.
I love you
A contest entry
- 30-60 words Contest PIF Quickie..Picture Prompt ..58th Contest by Spiritualangel by spiritualangel.
660 points, ended December 3, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Beautiful. Well done. Best of Luck.
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a great take onthe promt good luck inthe contest
marailsa
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NIce write. Good luck with it.
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Well done, you have captured the feeling of the picture prompt, great job, blessings John
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Thanks for commenting on my poems. I do appreciate your comments. They make me feel much better. Since I know someone who is reading them actually likes them.
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Loving someone from the heart is amazing, feeling like there is no tomorrow for your friend, brother and lover. Love those words very deep with alot of emotions. Good luck.
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Thanks for commenting on my poems. I really do appreciate you very much! Your kind comments make me feel that someone out there really does read and like what i write. I do appreciate you!
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Love is amazing
You captured this beautifully
a friend, brother and lover
Best wishes and good luck to you
Julie
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Thanks for commenting on my poems. Your kind words really do mean a whole lot to me. It's nice knowing that you are out there reading my work... and it's nice to know that you like them. Thanks again.
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awe its so cute -
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you are sweet! Are you feeling any better by now. That flu is a nasty thing to have. Thanks for commenting on my work! I do appreciate you.
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