i dont like my math teacher
she is alwyas so fat
she always look like a bat
Daddy where is Mommy
her hair is like a fork
Step1
hide the whiteboard cleaner
now the teacher would do two things
clean it with her finger
or she would just stare at it
either way you have successed
no more explanation is needed~
step2:
Bubleous is a great gum
it will be also great on the teacher bum
Congratulations you have just ruined her day
she isnt going to notice until may
step3
An ant is a great pet
it will also be great if it was in the teachers Textbook
a musem of ants, red ones, blue ones, black ones
oh look Ant eater!
that will be a hook for no homework for a week
if any of these didnt work then simple send rumours
that you have aids!
no maids can fix this with Aid
Next moring
teacher resigned for good
no wonder she was all not in a good mood
give her food, dont make her all tooo happy
or she will come back
a good posion on a toast will do
PS. DONT DO THIS UNLESS YOU HAVE ASKED YOUR PARENTS FIRST.
i agreed to the terms =}
A contest entry
- Make me Roll with Laughter PLEASE by Lady-Pegasus.
1200 points, ended December 4, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
any1 comments at all is appreciated even if it is bad~ it will help me~
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this was a facinating attenpt at humor. I can see where one would do well to ask permission before doing something like this. Anyways good luck in the contest!
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thank you
for your contest submission. Aside from the fact that there are considerable spelling errors, there is also some bashing involved in this piece that is unnecessary and against the rules. Also, please review the rules and follow them as written, for while you somewhat made a part of them, there are others totally missed. Best of luck in this and all of your endeavors.
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YOU ARE WELCOME!
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I enjoy the child-like tone you have set on this piece, it is effective and works well!
I'll be sure to try these things out in future.
my only crit would be to engourage you to get slightly more creative with your rymning scheme WRT certain phrases that could have been put more fluently -think about it
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yah at some parts it just sounds like a story~ but yah i need to work on it~..
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