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to forgive is our nature

"i'm sorry please forgive me,
your not a seals butt".
"i don't know why i said it,
i'm the ass one here, not you"
with words of such sincerity
and affectionate long hug
i excepted your apology
as i place my hand in yours
our hearts once more connected
and we got through another fight

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solitarytear

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  • spiritualangel
    December 3, 2008
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    Beautiful. Well done. Best of Luck.


  • Sarah957
    November 26, 2008
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    That is so cute! You thought of a great angle for this contest and made me laugh.


  • DolceVito gold member
    November 16, 2008
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    LMAO

    "a seal's butt"...lol


  • maralisa silver member
    November 16, 2008

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    a great take onthe promt there is nothing like saying sorry when we are need to a brilliant poem good luck inthe contest maralisa


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    November 12, 2008

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    Oh those arguments and then making up only to fight again
    Well written and reflects well
    Best wishes and good luck
    Julie

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