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The Destroyers

"Too long the destroyers have worked their will,
Sound for the last, the last of the wars."
from The Trumpet Call by Alfred Noyes



What is God doing with time
with technology getting more complex
and weapons of mass destruction now in line
to turn whole countries into wrecks?

God is letting us destroy ourselves.
"I have met the enemy; it is us," Pogo said.
Weapon makers are not Santa's elves.
If we don't get some sense, we'll all end up dead.


Author notes

This was inspired from reading Noyes in OldPoetry. Alfred Noyes was very much anti-war.

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  • Life is a Beach gold member
    November 14, 2008

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    Why is hate so easy for mankind and love so difficult? I sure hope understanding will come and peace will reign. Good and powerful message in this write! Pam


  • abuyi
    November 14, 2008

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    I have met the enemy; it is us," Pogo said.
    Weapon makers are not Santa's elves.
    very strong.. but what has god to do with this??? (that question is just to cook noodles)


  • tawk gold member
    November 14, 2008

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    Yes humanity will bring the end of time on ourselves it is so sad humanity could stop this but to many are selfish and out for power. Great write thanks for shairng hugs Theresa


  • Susan John Francis
    November 14, 2008
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    Yeah soon we all will end up dead . Nice write...


  • skye01 gold member
    November 13, 2008

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    I wish we could have peace all over the world. I'm glad yu like Bob Tail. He is very special along with his brothers KiKI and Sherman.


  • smonte19124 gold member
    November 12, 2008

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    Wonderful!

    I love the rhyme and flow of your words it just rolls so effortlessly. While you express the feelings of many today and you do it in so few words. God Bless, Jo-Ann*rose8


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    November 12, 2008
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    yes we are all in deep trouble ellis .you express so well

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