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Permanent Marker Truths on Bathroom Stalls


Oh what a sight to see!
My name in black and green
while under it is a statement,
declaring bits of fragments!

I did not sleep with any
for I had no choice in the matter.
One bet got out of control
and soon I lost,
touching,
pinning me down like an animal;
just to get a quick glance at my laces.

Never did I want this day,
who ever would want that!
But my word means nothing
so here I must lay...

A 'truth' which isn't,
and yet the world bows down.
What do we do?
Let it slide on by
like everything else. . .


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Day Number Two - Titles

A contest entry

What to do in an insane world?

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  • redhanded
    November 13, 2008

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    very nice write! I enjoyed the flow very much and the images are dancing acrossed my mind as your words flow so great. good luck in the contest.
    and best of luck to you in the future and with your writing.
    andi
    (redhanded)