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John's Saccharine Words

Remember..

        This means..

                           'Forever'

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Prompt: Four words on the picture painted by June Dudley

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  • LadyDementia gold member
    November 12, 2008

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    Aww this is so sweet, yet also rich in meaning, beautifully put! An excellent take on the picture


  • chilali
    November 12, 2008

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    Alyzeh. This was an incredible take on the picture. In just four words, you've said everything. So much depth and beauty in this piece. This is definitely a winner
    Okay, now I cannot wait to read the other two


  • Ken-Maverick
    November 12, 2008

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    and so it should,

    Thats all that needs to be said,
    well done
    Good luck in the contest

    Ken


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    November 12, 2008

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    Beautifully sculptured in those four words
    I wish you all the best for this contest
    Very nicely put ..
    Julie


  • Meroza
    November 12, 2008

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    Wow, so much much meaning and so much depth in just those four words! Amazing!

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