I remember the day.....
Author notes
4 words only on the picture
painted by June Dudley
A contest entry
- In four words by Lavender Butterfly.
550 points, ended November 13, 2008, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Aww precious!! Think we may all have a memory such as this!



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Congratulations on the HM. You deserved so much more for this piece. At least it was recognized though for the beauty it truly is!


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Aw...perfect. I remember the day, too. Why do I feel so old now? lol
Thanks again.
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4 words is not easy to think of but you did it beautifully 


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very apted!
very poignant and nostalgic. simple yet deep and stirring. I love it!

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good take on the prompt . . best of luck in the contest . .


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This is very clever and leaves the reader pondering so many things.
All the best with this
Gaylene


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That was a really good choice of 4 words, kind of leaves the reader hanging.. wonderful job! best of luck in the contest!
Angel
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