We build our own realities..
Life always gives u back what u give it.. Ur life is not a coincidence but a mirror of ur own doing..
Yet why?.. Sometimes.. Just sometimes.. It doesn’t matter why.. Not anymore..
Because Somehow u knw HE is thr and always will be.. I can feel Him through every cell of my weak body whos soul is just learning to stand..
Within every fallen leaf..
Every silent whisper of hope..
Every wave crashing against the next of 2mrws..
Within every sunrise i thought i'd never see..
And everyday holds the possibility of a miracle..
Once u look around u come to realize every second is a miracle ..
That can take ur breath away ..
And at times lifes wicked.. Knocks u dwn so hard u don’t even wana stand but it builds u making us all who we are 2day... So live .. And smile.. Why? Why not i tell you ... And If lookn back hurtz u and lookn forward scares u thn look beside u and i will always b here 4 u… thats what frndz r for… right..
And life is never breaking a promise
.life is waking up smiling like u whr jst flying
Itz brushing someones tearz away and giving them ur smile though u knw u might not get it back
Life is watching a child play.. Itz holding a child in ur armz and knwing u could shape it ..mold it into something even more beautiful..
Itz playing tag just because u felt like it and dancing in the rain..
Itz even like a flower when something crushes u..you leave a fragrnce behind in the hands...
Itz giving up everything for something that may just change one persons life.. Yet itz ok ..because one life startz with one step..
Life is to get knocked dwn yet to stand and start all ovr agn..
Itz when u help ur mother out whn she didn ask u to..
Life is love.. In all different shapes forms and kinds..
So u shouldn’t let it pass by like that.. You'l never get the exact moment second of the day of this year ever again..
Life is what u read in someone’s eyes...
well... i havent written in a long time... soo i don knw.. i don even knw if its a poem... LOL jst tell me wha u think..
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this is rlly good!!!
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thank you..very kind of you to say so..
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a couple of things: first, this is texting, but the fact you begin and end with abbreviations makes it viable as a work of words, poetry...? maybe. i don't think, i would call this prose poetry; it is more like a soliloquy in third person narration; which probably would have been more effective had you used first person form. your title is in first person and that's what drew me in. second thing: for something this long, i would have used breaking-devices of different kinds; breaking the text into "managable" paragraphs by skipping a line or two is one kind of breaking-device,...using a conjunctive, like "and,...but,..or..." to separate the paragraphs is another. once you start writing again, it will come back to you...! and thank you for writing in my guest-book!
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thank you for the advice..
i will work on it...=D
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good pen on this one for this is the way I see it.. for love should never be passed by .. many hugs always Angel♥
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<3 THANK YOU !
i look forward to ur comments everyday.. =D
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So u shouldn’t let it pass by like that.. You'l never get the exact moment second of the day of this year ever again..
Life is what u read in someone’s eyes...
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nice ending
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why thank you =P
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ohhh my good golly gosh this is amazing. lol i just figured out that the 'poems im focused on' poems are by like the people whos page theyre on...lol wtf im retarded!! but this is like amazing. no its not a poem. its more than a poem.
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hey long time... missed you...thnks
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so true
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LOL glad u liked it ;)
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