Dear friends
I have a few questions
What do you feel when you see the condition of the world today?
Do you look to the ground and shake your head?
Do you whisper to the lord instead?
How do you feel after seeing the news grow worse each year?
Americas in its deepest economy crisis
does your heart render fear?
OR DO YOU...
simply shed a tear or two
for those that are far worse off than you?
Do you pray each day asking the lord to
watch over your entire family?
In the midst of any tragedy.
Or do you go on through life with nothing to fear?
The words of truth pretending not to hear.
Each morning whats the first thing you do?
Tell me, what brings you through?
Love,
Faith,
Forgiveness,
Fear,
Anger,
Sorrow,
there all apart of today
What keeps you standing untill tommorow?
Do you ask why the world is this way
is it because we dont love one another?
We dont see inside each heart
wed rather judge everyone at the start.
Why do we act as if we dont know the truth?
Letting evil take over our very youth.
What can we do to help?
I can think of many things
no one will listen to me
Im to small and insignificant you see.
AND....
What should I do to feel at ease?
what would you do ?
tell me if you please.
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Superb plus
A very fine write, indeed. I admire what you had to say; and you said it very well. Reminded me of my series on Homelessness. here's a link to my list of titles regarding Homelessness:
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This is like a sigh of relief to my mind. You've summed up thoughts that most can't even retain longer than their next text message...Beautiful, once again. I'm really looking forward to reading your work, new and old. My deepest compliments.


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Excellent work here
I must say BRAVO to this most excellent piece of work and such love and understanding within its word indeed what do we do to get us through . I love your work honey and never ever stop writing I also put you on my favorites as well I hope you dont mind

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Thanks so much for your kind comments and thanks for being such helpful friends willing to tell the truth and understand my thoughts Im so glad I met all of you here on AP thanks for adding me to your favorites no I do not mind one little bit Im happy to have gained a new friend here!
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JUST BEAUTIFUL!!!
You do have your heart in the right place my friend
's We do need as a people come together and have faith in God and stand up for what we feel is right. I have some ideas as to how to solve our problem but like you I feel who would listen to me?
I used to believe a few could make a difference but in todays society just a few do not stand a chance, it will take millions to stand up and demand change, demand truth and honesty from our leaders.
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Profound inspirational write..which I appreciate...You gave alot of thought to writing this, for which you should be praised..Great write!


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