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Spectator

The cities crumble
Blood boils
And spills

The body count
Rises
Along with our fears

Voices
Of wrath
And vengeance

Are second
Only
To wails of mourners

Still
No one notices
The man in the back

Author notes

Sometimes, the answer lies in our own backyards...

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  • mz.butter
    December 5, 2008
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    nice write


  • Deathless1
    November 19, 2008
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    that would be the person to be the man in the back.
    nice write.
    well thought out.


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    November 18, 2008

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    Your imagery is excellent, very vivid and striking
    This gives the reader a lot to picture

    Very well penned