My sweet rainbow
My beautiful star
Become mine once more
In a world where kindness can become only pain
Let us pierce each others' hearts together
My sweet, lovely rainbow
My sweet rainbow...
Author notes
A short tribute to Strawberry Panic cuz it's the awesomest thing ever.
Tis Late. Comments, as always, appreciated
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hmm, i likes the 1st 3 lines, i not likes the rest so much. it is very picturesque but then the image fades and it's not as clear what you're going for anymore. btw, i still can't remember those hand movements. i locked that door so long ago that i can't find the key. although it really doesn't take very long for me to lose something as small as a key. whatever.
luv,
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Well the poem was more of sort of a memoir, ya know, so thank you for your comment
Use bigger keys and don't lock so much.
Your Buddy,
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have to lock. otherwise stuff gets out. eventually the lock will rust and i will die in a sea of memories i wish i didn't have. which is very different from drowning in my happy place, like i was on monday. it was fun.
luv,
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*hug for you*
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Drowning in a happy place? Little bit of an oxymoron...
-Me
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