The sound of a small flicker resonates in the open air
as a spark of light explodes; ignited to warm the young
lovers which illuminates the awkwardness of a silent stare.
The stare grows intense and erupts into a roar. The fire with
its ardent eyes focus straight ahead, gulp with thirst and race
for more.
As the heated blaze rises with fury, the partners embrace with
wonder and worry.
The flame with its hungry eyes desirously streams to
destroy and demise.
This exuberant energy ostentatious and irascible undertakes
with feisty thoughts of the disasterful.
A calamity takes over this once harmonious nature filled place
leaving the couple viewing the now empty space.
What first is necessary to life and to love, this passion that lurks within
us and is seldom learned of. Caged like a dangerous species and locked away,
once this desire is out, released it will stay.
Passion that's unending like a fatal disease, may either put you to death or
begin life's reprise
Author notes
Ready for critical responses. I want to know how I can become better.
Written February 2nd, 2004
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this poem was great. it had a fantastic flow and used some great words. it really described passion well. well done!
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this was soooo terrific, it flowed very nicely and was very easy to read. i read it twice it was so good. very very good write
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I love it!! a perfect example of the ups and downs of passion.. you are an amazing poet! keep these poems coming!
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