My love for her is a never ending flame
Which will never weaken and never lose strength
I think about her in my dreams
And she is always on my mind
My sun rises with her in my heart
I love her laugh, her smile, her everything
She is truely an angel from up above
No one could be more perfet than her
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17 Connersville
A contest entry
- New Contest Enter.... by darkchemgirl.
475 points, ended November 13, 2008, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is a really cute poem i love it!
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The way you show your emotions on this is exquisite. You show a powerful emotion on how you feel about this special someone. When you write next time though, be sure to make more imagery or stronger words. You have a great grasp on this but you need to emphases what you feel and how it could be. Otherwise you have done a really great job. Good luck in the contest.
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