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Forever and Always

I will always love you, no matter what,
A part of you will forever stay inside my heart,
And nothing, not even time, will change that.

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Always loved these lines... But never seemed to be able to turn them into anything...

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  • mizerdrea
    November 22, 2008

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    wow, i love them.
    that such a simple words, but with a great strong feelings...

    love yaa~


  • McRae by nature
    November 12, 2008

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    Very simple and flexible. I think that you could take this many places. It is a great start. I understand the frustration with writing around these lines. They are really heartfelt, but some times when you try to stretch words out, they loose their meaning. Best of luck.

    Carrie


  • KateMadness
    November 12, 2008

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    Aww

    That was gorgeous. I think you did a spectacular job. I can see why it may take you a while. Sometimes its hard to convey something like that.

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