When I first saw you
across the room
Baby I couldn't stop
from looking at you
Darling those brown eyes
staring at me
Keep me mezmerized
like I'm in some dream
Sweetie you'll never know
what you do to me
Those piercing eyes
can see right thru me
But I'm hoping one day
I can let you know
About the state
my heart has been in
..But until then
(Chorus)
(2nd-But)
Baby you got me
Right where you want me
Baby you got me
Where I wanna be
Honey you have me
Have me by the heart
Baby you've had me
Right from the start
(Hook)
I'll never
never
Stop this feeling
I'll never
Oh I'll never
Be able to not Love You
Cause when I see you
walking past me
Oh my heart stops
its regular beat
My palms feel sweaty
I tremble at the thought
Of kissing you
and to never have to stop
Baby I can feel you
all around me
Even when you're not
that close to me
(Chorus 2nd)
Cause when I first saw you
from across that room
Who would have thought
that I'd get you
And that deep connection
I share with you
Will never break
No matter what we go thru
Author notes
One day after school, I sat down and this just came out....Hope ya like!
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Oh I love this! I would love to hear it performed it sometime! Made me think of my sweet hubby when I read this. First time we met I knew he would be the one! Ten years and one little girl later, he still writes me love notes.
I love the happy thoughts this gave me, thanks for sharing! Awesome write my friend.
Blessings,
Amy
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i love this, it puts quite a smile on my face. very sweet, very uplifting. =)
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THIS IS SO SWEET!!!!!
Oh my! Isn't is a wonderful feeling when this happpens!
's It is special indeed when a person can make you feel like this!
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I'll say it again, good flow. I like the simplicity.
~Noor
(ok, my name's not Noor, but it's a cool name, right? lol)
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I really enjoyed reading it, you got a good flow going on. You used some wonderful words back there that just made me think. Keep this up!
~Noor
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o; I feel this way about someone :] very good poem, liked it, enojoyed reading it! ;D
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Hey, I really like this, it has a nice easy relaxing flow to it, I would love to hear it sung
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