Jagged promises; failing in unity
A thief is in my midst
Lie in wait; in the shadows above
A web spun of your deceptive chasms
I will succumb again
No more
Author notes
Credit : http://th06.deviantart.com/fs20/300W/i/2007/284/e/1/Solitude_by_angelandluci.jpg
A contest entry
- *Ahem* In the mood for a quickie? Come in and join the fun! ^_^ by chilali.
800 points, ended November 13, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Nice and short. Great take on the picture. Thank you for entering. Good luck
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wow
you did alsoem to with the pic its a beautiful poem
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This reminds me of my 'circumtances' towards men. It's too high for even I to climb. What a wonderful way to pen the picture! A bit abstract which I love.
Great job and good luck!! 
~Kystal Angel
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alot said in few words.
Well done and good luck in the contest
Juls
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Great word usage! This does leave the mind filled with so much from details in so few words! Wonderful to read! Good luck in the contest!
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