...Ash now forms the pallet that the world is painted in,
and thin to watch the flame expose the skin...
A contest entry
- Incompleted Thoughts (quick and easy contest) by McRae by nature.
700 points, ended November 17, 2008, 15 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Congrats on your incomplete gold.
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A M A Z I N G... This is just brilliant. Exactly what I wanted, just enough of an idea to make you think and just enough mystery to keep you wanting to read more.
perfect.
Carrie
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Oooo, this is KOOL! I love the imagery, one I would love to see finished!
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maybe I should make it an addline and you could help.
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