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Prisoner of Play (Harrisham Sonnet)


Prisoner of self satisfaction, an overrated play
reaching out for comforts distraction, lustful foreplay
Graceful movements, a sweet attraction, blows the mind away
long fingers in heated traction, gripping tight in a unique way
greedily hips grind in reaction, to the way the legs lay
your eyes glued in place as the interaction becomes intense today

Sounds so enchanting come from my own lips
sweet sexual panting, my bodies giving in
Teasing points so divine, I start grinding my hips
groove's that fingers crossed, then slipped within
Shaping muscles around tightly, pleasure drips
giving into sweet ecstasy, the pleasure will now begin

Hands and body entwine, the forbidden scent released
shaved in a sweet design, passionate play's increased

Author notes

This is done in Harrisham Form with a Tory twist as usual, I have done many of these and even won gold once lol. This was more or less for practice and fun. Done with internal rhyming.

Sorry Harrisham Minhas, just had to go off and do my thing here, you always told me have fun with it LOL well here i went.

best wishes to all writers in this contest


Form: Harrisham Sonnet



Harrisham Sonnet poetry form was created by Indian poetess ~ Harrisham Minhas.

Harrisham Sonnet is written in 3 stanzas consisting of 2 sestets and a couplet.

For each of the stanzas, the last letter of the first word of each line is the first letter of the first word of the next line.
There is no restriction on the starting letter of the first line in each of the stanzas.

There is no restriction on the syllable count in this form, but it is required that the poem should have a good rhythm to it.


Rhyme scheme:

First stanza : ababab
Second stanza: cdcdcd
Third stanza: ee

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  • Harrisham Minhas
    November 15, 2008
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    Hi Tory.
    This is a sensual and passionate write which vividly expresses the interaction between you and your lover.
    I have no problem with your twist of internal rhyme.
    Glad that you had fun writing and glad to see you enter another Harrisham Sonnet contest.
    Well-expressed.

    Thanks for your entry.

    Harrisham Minhas


  • Harrisham Minhas
    November 14, 2008
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    Please rectify it soon.




  • Ellis gold member
    November 14, 2008
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    Excellent

    Enjoyed reading


  • cricketjeff gold member
    November 12, 2008

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    I have never seen the point of the first letter restriction on this form, but you do them beautifully and this is one of your very best

  • Harrisham Minhas
    November 12, 2008

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    In the second stanza, 3rd and 4th lines:

    "Teasing points so divine, I start grinding my hips
    fingertips crossing the line then slipping within"

    4th line should start with "g" instead of "f", according to the form.

    Please rectify it.
    I will come back to comment on your poem.




  • The Drifter
    November 11, 2008

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    I found myself picturing just what you were describing.
    I'll not say who I saw in
    the fantasy play, but I wk]ill say it was extremely hot. This z great sonner-love it.


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 11, 2008

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    you are pure and unchecked poetic brilliance , i mean you did a great job on this, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


    • PassionsPromise gold member
      November 11, 2008
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      Thanks so much for your wonderful comment hon.
      Appreciate it.

      Love
      Passions

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