

Author notes
This is done in Harrisham Form with a Tory twist as usual, I have done many of these and even won gold once lol. This was more or less for practice and fun. Done with internal rhyming.
Sorry Harrisham Minhas, just had to go off and do my thing here, you always told me have fun with it LOL
well here i went.
best wishes to all writers in this contest
Form: Harrisham Sonnet
Harrisham Sonnet poetry form was created by Indian poetess ~ Harrisham Minhas.
Harrisham Sonnet is written in 3 stanzas consisting of 2 sestets and a couplet.
For each of the stanzas, the last letter of the first word of each line is the first letter of the first word of the next line.
There is no restriction on the starting letter of the first line in each of the stanzas.
There is no restriction on the syllable count in this form, but it is required that the poem should have a good rhythm to it.
Rhyme scheme:
First stanza : ababab
Second stanza: cdcdcd
Third stanza: ee
A contest entry
- Harrisham Sonnet by Harrisham Minhas.
450 points, ended November 16, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Hi Tory.

This is a sensual and passionate write which vividly expresses the interaction between you and your lover.
I have no problem with your twist of internal rhyme.
Glad that you had fun writing and glad to see you enter another Harrisham Sonnet contest.
Well-expressed.
Thanks for your entry.
Harrisham Minhas



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Please rectify it soon.


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done sorry
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No problem.
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Excellent
Enjoyed reading

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I have never seen the point of the first letter restriction on this form, but you do them beautifully and this is one of your very best


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In the second stanza, 3rd and 4th lines:
"Teasing points so divine, I start grinding my hips
fingertips crossing the line then slipping within"
4th line should start with "g" instead of "f", according to the form.
Please rectify it.
I will come back to comment on your poem.


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I found myself picturing just what you were describing.
I'll not say who I saw in
the fantasy play, but I wk]ill say it was extremely hot. This z great sonner-love it.


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you are pure and unchecked poetic brilliance , i mean you did a great job on this, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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Thanks so much for your wonderful comment hon.
Appreciate it.
Love
Passions
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