everything I’ve been through
has never harmed me as much as you.
I can never hurt myself as much as your words do.
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Two years later I'll bet you could finish it well.
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I think that these lines present more of a strong feeling than idea. I liked very much the last line. It really expresses well how much words do effect people. I think if you look into past experiences, you will find the words to complete this work. Best of luck.
Carrie
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hmm I like it.
it didn't seem very emotional though.
that's why I don't care much for short poems. -
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lol i wrote this when i first started writing.. so like 2 years ago lmfao
i just found it on my comp so ya.
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Wow
How blunt. Who ever did this to you really messed up. They must have said something really evil. -
Wow, very cutting to the heart. I can see this one ending in self pride and being made stronger. Well done!
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