Dreams shared from hearts pure love
Intimate moments from heaven above
Bound together for an eternal love
Author notes
started and never completed
A contest entry
- Incompleted Thoughts (quick and easy contest) by McRae by nature.
700 points, ended November 17, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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short and to the point. Very succinct...Dan
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this is merely some thoughts to written the contest was for unfinished poetry and this one was entered for that purpose, I goes unfinished because i never finished it. Thank you for your comment.
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good start. Maybe you'll finish it some time. I bet you're really busy.
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I'd say this is a wonderful start, can't wait to see it finished. I have dozens of poems that have yet to be completed.
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thank you, your comments are always welcome here. I really do enjoy the time spent reading your work, it leaves me a better person...
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What a beautiful beginning to a love poem. Very poetic indeed! A delight to read. Take care, Sandy
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Sandy
Thank you for stopping by and leaving a thoughtful comment, I greatly appreaciate it.
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LOve is always a great insiration, yet sometimes the mind does not complete it's mission.
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thank you so much, very clever comment, thank you!
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A great start. The theme of "love" is pretty easy to run with. I think you should not have too much trouble writing this into a complete piece eventually. Good luck
Carrie
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thank you so much.
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Super cool
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and so are you my favorite italian peach...muah!
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short..
but very nice!! lots of luck to you my friend in the contest.
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lol...that's because its unfinished...thank you for your well wishes..
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Love
I have often wondered what love between a man & a women really is. Sadly I do not know. Words , here on AP speak of it. But I want real proof. lol
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from the female side of it, I have had to kiss a lot of toads to find my prince, but i finally did and have my dream come true life partner. It is as close to real love as it gets here on earth. Thanks for your comments, it is always appreciated.
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One more line could make this one complete. Unsure what Id say for it yet, but it could be so powerful in so few words, well done!
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thank you so very much for your comments
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These are great thoughts to gear towards a poem! Little snippets that do promise to create a wonderful poem! Good luck in the contest!
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thank you so very much
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