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Locket, Pickpocket, Hangs!

Old Salley faces gallows.
Will she eat Jail gruel?
Will monks pray?

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sorry if this doesn't fit with the contest.. You didn't say it had to be about Oliver twist!
Patsy

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  • Little Eagle Greeters member
    November 21, 2008

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    Thank you for your entry

    Well I have to say, that it wouldn't be fair if I did say it had to be about Oliver Twist, because some may not have read or seen the movie. This fits well though using the words. I just wish you had put the words in your author's notes so I would know which ones you used.

    You followed the form and syllable count well. You had all elements with the statement, question, question.

    I encourage you to keep writing to read and comment.

    God Bless
    Tammy