"Bow down filthy peasants
your cheese isn't fit to cloth my pizza
you reek of shaving cream and piss
And Damnit!!!
that shoe goes on the other foot
I swear
i'll ignore your calls if you don't go start a riot
!!!!!!!!!!!!!
that's not how you swing a nightstick
You club them like so"
*Thud*
"what happened to that guy?"
"I don't know, he just went berserk and started yelling at everyone. When the cop tried to stop him he grabbed the officers Club and began bashing his head as hard as he could"
"oh"
The End
Author notes
Frustration makes us irrational
A contest entry
- Frustration by Polaja.
1200 points, ended November 13, 2008, 40 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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hahah classic
This is definately a fine work of Art right here. I'm still giggling slightly from this-not only did it appeal to my odd sense of humour but it's been crafted very well as a creative writing piece.
Legend
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this is a really odd, but charming poem - I like the narrative of it - although I think that there are ways that this could have maintained a more traditional tone (minus all the '!'s and such) and therefore flowed a little smoother - but the content is fantastic and that is just my opinion 
great take on the prompt!
Thank you for entering
Polly
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i love it wonderfully,you calm psychopath!!!
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