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My Broken Heart

As I sit here craddling
my now broken heart.
I remember how I fell for you
right from the very start.

I fell so hard and fast
don't really know what was on my mind.
All I really know for sure
is that the stars all seemed to align.

So very much in common
we could almost be one in the same.
Silly me for thinking maybe
you could be my twin flame.

Knowing we could never be
still never stopped the way I feel.
My love I expressed every day
for that I can not conceal.

I love you so much
way more than I should.
You said you loved me just as well
though I don't see how you could.

I know I am such a pain in the ass
always doubting what you say.
But honestly  baby from my broken heart
I never meant to push you away.

Please tell me what you think

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  • The Jigsaw Poet
    November 12, 2008
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    This poem is really touching, your write are always so amazing at conveying emotion, trully great writes frrom the heart of an amzing poet, and brilliant person Reading your poems always leaves me thanking myself for doing so for a long time after

    keep writing this amazing stuff

    Rob

  • mcfreeman
    November 12, 2008
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    Touching a core...in writer and reader

    this speak to any who are true believers.


  • Rhythm Child
    November 12, 2008

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    a very sad and heartfelt poem, its brilliant just how well you can express yourself through you words
    great poem shell


    • sensualbutterfly
      November 12, 2008
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      Thank you so much little bro. Never been called brilliant before. Thanks for reading


  • carl dunford
    November 12, 2008

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    You didn't.

    A very touching poem babe,
    but do not fear I'm still here, my feelings are still the same. I am here to stay, it takes a lot more to push me away!


    • sensualbutterfly
      November 12, 2008
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      You must truly be an angel. No one can have that much patience with one person. Thank you baby.


  • hotchocolate gold member
    November 11, 2008
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    This is a really heartfelt write here and I enjoyed reading this hon!

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