I dropped my heart in a vast empty sea.
(good riddance.)
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- Nuggets Of Truth by Michael H..
577 points, ended November 11, 2008, 10 entries
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Then you always have the chance of it floating back to you. I keep mine sheltered inside a wall built of the thickest material I could find, the fear of causing pain to those who would attempt to gather it to them.

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It kind of reminds me of the Titanic, a bit sad, but maybe a good thing. -
that's cute.
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Cool. Great way of describing of losing your heart.
Good job. Thanks for entering.




