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Floating on the wings of a dove

Journey to the edge of time
Feeling fresh cool, clear, calm.
Here on the edge
Without fear of falling
Hope, happiness without harm.

Water falls freely within my heart
Each step slowly reaching nearer
Unknown understanding - unusual excitement
All the time getting clearer.

Contentment, clarity of mind deep within
Perfect peace powerfully fills with love
No distractions, no temptation, no sin
Freedom floating on the wings of a dove.

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  • Samplette gold member
    November 24, 2008

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    Beautiful! Gives off a peaceful feeling, with a spiritual strength. Very nice. Thank you for entering.
    Sam


  • Janice M Pickett
    November 11, 2008
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    A lovely peaceful and spiritual write.


  • smonte19124 gold member
    November 11, 2008

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    To find your personal center is a wonderful stabilizing thing. Your words bring calmness and serenity to the soul with their beauty. Great Job and you have fulfilled the prompt admirably with a lovely image to complete your words. God Bless, Jo-Ann

  • Amethyst MoonShadow
    November 11, 2008

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    Beautiful picture here and on the contest. Wonderful words of freedom. Contentment seems to pour through these words leaving me as a reader feeling just as serene as these words seem to convey. Good luck in the contest!