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Six Worst Enemies

Weed the 'greed' out
Hang ,the 'anger' on stands
Let the stances of 'ego' go elsewhere
Don't plant undesirable 'wants' in heart and soul
'passion' should not become a thing of fashion
Lust' should not rust your ideals

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  • Walking Oxymoron gold member
    November 11, 2008
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    Gotta know, how did you manage to make 6 lines read as 5????