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Alice And The Burning Pet All

It's her fit legs thats taken her around the world
Cor blimey your honor did she eat some cake or what?

It's a small place to dance in this the wishing well
Cor blimey how many coins will it be costing her today?

In both villages they enjoyed the tea, drinking the queen
Cor blimey the end of the first day what will she do?

The black and white rabbit stopped to think about it
Cor blimey well I never said the rabbit to the black hole?

It could of been a worse trip when jumping up the hole
Cor blimey will Alice ever learn no the queen thinks?

Never mind thinks Alice 24/7 drinking time, now she smiles
Cor blimey the cake felt angry and wanted to be petted?

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Option Three. Alice in Wonderland

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  • Werewolf Avarus
    November 13, 2008
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    Can you please go back and read the rules