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Can You Handle It?

Here's the simple truth:
while you were writing him
a love letter,
I was kissing him.
Who wins?

A contest entry

Any comments are appreciated.

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  • MissCDT
    June 1
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    You do. And you deserve him. Be happy.


  • I.am.the.sun.
    January 5

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    the winner could be the girl he met while on his last trip outta town, ya never know! heh
    what did the kiss say? you win? or there's another?


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    November 15, 2008

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    damn! i would whoop ur ass writer i like your style this piece was definately a threat to the others because i really like this one good luck in the contest


  • Shakes-spear
    November 12, 2008
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    depends

    on where he spends the night! good luck in the contest! The Shaker