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Sound

As I listen to the sound slowly drizzling through the speakers

I am over taken by the tide of the chorus and I am drug out to the ocean of blissful indulgence

 

The wave of emotion the words and melody bring are much to strong and I find myself floating along being drug under by the tow…

My body slowly weaves its way from the chair as I slowly become one with the current of the melody

 

My hair melds into the bars of the music, each meter becoming a new golden highlight on the auburn sheet

Each note flows across and dissipates into my scalp slowly the music becomes one with me

One measure at a time…

 

My body is but a slave to the current of it all

It sways slowly with the rocking motion of the waves of the music

It is helpless as the beat crashes into the shore of my psyche and takes over

My body is merely a solitary peak on a wave in the vast ocean of sound that is the smooth melody, shimmering as it floats on into oblivion

Author notes

While listening to Blue October- Into the Ocean, I was suddenly inspired to write a piece about the ocean of music that crashes into you when you listen to a song you just can't help but connect with.

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