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"When desolation is your only friend"

It never get's easy
saying goodbye
to the one you love,
when it's over,
what is there to do?
Unfinished business
more to do,
but they said, "no,"
they said, "no."
So you sit and stare
watching the fallen leaves
scatter from the wind.
You wonder what went wrong,
no explanation to give
only the result of fallen tears.

Dreams start to haunt,
along with past glimpses
and stares once filled with devotion.
When desolation is your only friend,
you wonder sometimes out loud,
"what went wrong, what went wrong?"
You may never know,
only assume
but the end result is falling tears.

11-11-08

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  • heinzs silver member
    February 23
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    Beautiful and poignant.


  • Cocoa Bubbles
    December 16, 2008
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    Exactly.


  • smiley
    December 2, 2008

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    so sad

    this took me back to my Shawn and what happened to us. life, love and the pursuit of it all will fall into place in time.

    Yvonne


  • nell
    November 12, 2008

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    Oh my babe this one really goes straight to the heart, this is a position most of us have been in, I'm currently in, and you have captured the moment and emotions so so well.

    *HugHugs*
    Nell

    • Cwm
      November 12, 2008
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      awwww thank you Nell.. you know writing about it helps... hope my poem has helped you.

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