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Vile Defeat

Toot sweet!
So cool, your feet,
With toenails clean and neat.
But flip-flops spoil the whole effect.
It’s wrecked.

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Getting right down to the bottom of things.

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  • just mercedes gold member
    November 23, 2008
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    That's the second foot poem I've read in two days! I like this.

  • ea silver member
    November 12, 2008

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    cute cinquain. How about Birkies then? LOL. Yours are some of the most unconventional topics for cinquains I've ever encountered. Congrats on the HM!