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Speaking of Life

speaking of LIFE how can you live yours
knowing what you have done to others
all the PAIN
and torture you put THEM through
how can you live YOUR LIFE knowing you killed so many others
how can you live your life knowing you DESTROYED thousands
how could you do that?
how can YOU LIVE that life?
they suffered
they DIED
you fed
off their pain
their DEATH
their anguish
you sat back and WATCHED souls die
watched them begging for help
asking only for MERCY
to be saved
promising to fix what THEY had done
but it was you
YOUR wrongs
not theirs
so how can you live YOUR LIFE knowing what YOU had done?

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  • Paloszoo gold member
    November 12, 2008

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    So much anger and emotion in this raw piece! Nicely done. Thanks for entering my contest. I'm honored to have you share your work here. Good luck!