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For The Rest of Time(19)

Gentle caresses,
Of soft fingertips,
Send my heart racing,
Euphoric sensations release,
As you hold me close.

I've been held before,
Many a time,
But never before,
Has it felt so right,
And so meant to be.

I wish time didn't move so fast.
I would stop it if I could,
Stop it for an eternity,
So I could stay right here,
For the rest of time.

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  • Maxboy gold member
    November 12, 2008

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    A wonderful poem, I especially like the first stanza.

    Very Good...Best wishes in the contest


  • dustytiger
    November 11, 2008

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    wow this is just beautiful, i like what you have written here, i am not a huge fan of the love genre but i like this, it fits perfectly with the prompt, best of luck in the contest