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Where Horizon's Shine

Missing image
Memories found
in the most inconspicuous ways
where horizons shine
outward past the shadows
taken within the moment of time
seldom in that promise
of someone's eyes
precious when found
like diamonds
glittering in the heart.

Nov. 11, 2008

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  • artie
    January 13
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    Beautiful poem

    Reminds me of being high atop stony man mountain
    in the shenandoah valley

    Richard Diem

  • artie
    January 13
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    beautiful poem

    Reminds me of being high atop stony man mountain
    in the shenandoah valley

  • michaeline
    January 13

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    Precious when found like diamonds glittering in the heart.Beautifully penned.You give alot of imagry and you are a very talanted writer.I like what you have painted in your words.Love the backround and the title that you chose was a good one.Great job.

  • bookwrm1324
    January 11
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    great metaphors and imagery here. very nice flow, just a generally good poem.


  • Heroesrox silver member
    January 1

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    Veryu good piece. You really made it feel emotional and real. Great job with the penning! An A+ job with word usage and everything. Keep up the great work! I will be looking forward to reading and commenting on more of your work soon. i hope that you can get the chance to COMMENT back on my work, seeing as how I am sure that you and I take the same amount of love and put it into each and every piece that we write! Thanks so much for the share and again, a brilliant write!

    THANKS SO MUCH!

    ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~Heroesrox~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~


  • IrishGypsyRose silver member
    November 16, 2008

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    Breathtaking!

    I love the message here. Finding promises like diamonds glittering in the heart. What an amazing metaphor. Fantastic write.


  • Cyber Artist Moderators member
    November 15, 2008

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    your observation of this is very clear, a slice of time, now gone never to return... I guess the sun is the brightest of all jewels. Nice composition and interpretation of the picture.
    Cyber


  • Kate-the-Shrew
    November 12, 2008

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    WOw. you have turned memory and nostalgia into a splenderous thing here. the imagery is breathtaking, there's so little i can say to enhance it. you've done a wonderful job with such a short amount of space. never give this gift up!!


  • LadyDeMarco
    November 11, 2008

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    pretty.. love the picture. you're such a good poet. "memories found in the most inconspicuous ways."


  • Nephlim
    November 11, 2008

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    Really short, but it's pretty at the same time, you used wonderful descriptions to illustrate your poem =]
    GREAT job
    diggin it majorly


  • Salt Therapy
    November 11, 2008
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    beautiful bill. will you please read mine November Rain? thanks

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