Sudden darkness
Bringing forth hidden shadows
Lost to yourself to reveal
sudden light to pave the way
To Hope
Lucian Valcor"
A contest entry
- 5 line Challenge ... Contest by Riftkin.
700 points, ended November 12, 2008, 25 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
any suggestions please leave them
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very simple, though thought provoking,,, hope is often all and individual may have,,and hope will deliver them
Thanks for sharing
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Gorgeous "voice" to this!
The opposites work so well here.
Definitely need to check this "voice" out further!!
Beautifully penned, indeed.
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Beautifully done Lucian and congrats on the bronze. such a twist with darkness falling over all and light then prevailing. Such optimism
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Wow...beautiful words, short, yet amazing
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stunning
Baby, I think that your poetry just astounds me! You take what is around you and within you and you release it into such beautiful imagery and powerful words.
Wonderfully written! I would have given you gold!
Love always your wife,
Midnight Raeven
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Simple and powerful. You get better and better with every single write, Lucian. Congrats on the bronze! You totally deserved that or better. -Liz
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A rainbow in the midst of darkness. The many colors of hope that guides the way. Or at least that is what I gathered. Five lines and yet it speaks a lot to the reader. I really enjoyed reading this. Good luck in the contest.
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This was good. Very well penned
And your background is beautiful
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